The Company: Erin Lomanjeck.
The Field: Public Speaking Coach.
Copy Type: Email marketing.
The general purpose: This email was part of a series sent to new leads (prospects) to encourage them to join the RED DOT SECRET Masterclass, which helped them deliver a TEDx speech.
The specific purpose: The email seeks to build curiosity and direct the prospects to click the link (which leads to the sales page).
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The Copy as Text Below
Subject Line: Dream About Becoming a TEDx Speaker? Here’s How…
Hey <FIRST-NAME>, Erin is here
Imagine your friend has a great idea for planning a road trip.
With her destination in mind, she packs her bags and jumps in the car.
She is excited and ambitious, hoping she'll make it.
Only she has one huge problem.
She doesn't know how to drive.
Her great idea failed before she even got started.
Believe it or not, this scenario often happens for many TED talk applicants.
See, a TED talk is 1% idea and 99% preparation.
You can hope things will work out, and your mom might tell you that you will make it. So, there's no reason they won't work out, right?
Wrong!
So many TED applicants have a "great idea" to share. Still, they lack the right preparations needed to successfully deliver their ideas.
This is why I believe TED applicants fail on day 1.
They focus on every aspect but Ignore learning from someone who has been through the process and is already an expert TED speaker.
Because let's face it here, it really hurts when you waste a lot of time trying to figure out what is the best idea you gonna share and how
Or feeling lost and don't know how to fill the Ted application and where to start
Or even worse, you don't know how the interview process works to avoid the frequent mistakes most applicants make…
Well, I think I have something for you here.
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That's why I created the RED DOT SECRET Masterclass, which walks you through the process from idea to ovation.
In this masterclass, I will take you by the hand, from crafting your idea, completing your application, and finally delivering your speech like a champion.
You will craft your talk based on a similar theme formatted by Tedx and write it using vocal tonality, which means you will make it memorable and outstanding.
Plus, having the opportunity to practice will make it natural and much easier for you.
You will know everything about your application and the interview process, so you will be confident that the process goes smoothly and effortlessly.
In only an 8-week online program, you will have all the videos, scripts, and templates you need from your home.
Isn't that what you Really want?
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Well, what about adding FREE extra bonuses here?
You will get a list of over 300 Tedx opportunities with organizers' names, websites, and contact information so that you can leave with your killer submission and the tools to go out and apply for your Tedx opportunity.
Need more bonuses?
What about a 1:1 call with me to review your application, get my feedback on your entire submission, and talk?!
In these two free hours, I will go over all the deeper work to help you:
· Get your application chosen,
· Craft your first talk draft for submission,
· Have the proven formula for a great TEDX talk,
· Nail your interviews and short videos for submission. (valued at $600)
But I can only do this for a short period.
So, are you ready to get started?
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Still not sure? See a comment from James, one of the participants in the RED DOT SECRET Masterclass.
"Working with Erin and speaking on TEDx was one of the best experiences of my life. Erin helped me with physical presence and how I communicate verbally and non-verbally, facial expressions, and my vocal tonality. It was the best experience. Erin really knows her stuff."
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See you Inside…
Erin
P.S. Want more proof that it works? How about a 30-day no-risk guarantee?
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